Halfway there…

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I already started my At Least 18 Comments race and I am already halfway there!

Beautiful, beautiful poetry.

I love beautiful poetry.

The pieces I have read reminded me to move out of my comfort zone and experiment. Variation is very vital. 🙂 Well, my pieces aren’t as good as theirs but I am willing to practice even more so I could improve! 🙂

So… I have commented on 8 poems already but I think I read more than 8!

Here are my current faves:

I am looking forward to more poems and talented poets! 🙂
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Love Indeed.


The scent left on my sheets,
The hair fallen while you're asleep,
The perfume you wore everyday,
Leave me forever in daze.

Your eyes that look into my soul;
Your lips that weaken my bones;
Your arms that take me wholly
Tell me I'm your one and only.

The fingerprints you left in me
Would need beyond a microscope to see
The sense of my life with you
How my love for you is true.
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Regrets

With words left unsaid, I cried.

The music ended but the sighs.

Words unspoken do not suffice.

Unexplainable, in your eyes I died.

I wanted you to stay;

Pride and prejudice came our way.

Our hearts were one and the same,

Now I’m a distressful dame.

Once sunny disposition, hitherto.

I love you, do say “too.”

Words unsaid left us impaired.

My soul, I should’ve bared.

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